BloodLust: Whispers of the Graves [v0.2.1]

Speaking to the graveyard assassins after the fight leads to "*Heavy Breathing* Our life's belongs to the king". Issue is with "life's", which is the possessive of life, as in life's mission or life's purpose, when you likely meant to use "lives" which is the plural of life, or more than one.

Speaking with Elizabeth the first time leads to "I've created a new spells. The usual banishments and rites are useless on them. They're... complicated cases." Issue is with "spells" plural, it was likely meant to be "spell" singular. 

Speaking with Theodore in the basement about learning the ropes and the previous tenant leads to "Disappearing wasn't unusual for her, but this time, he never came back. So... it's yours now. Congratulations!" Issue is with both "her" and "he" referring to the same person, the "he" is likely suppose to be "she".

Asking Eveline about the fat guy eventually leads to "Oh, don't look at me like that. Your friend is waiting for you... your better hurry", same with the voice lines. "Your" isn't the correct word here, should be "You" as "Your" is a possessive form of you. Sentence is telling the main character he owns the hurry, which doesn't make a lot of sense. 

Why is it so laggy when fighting with card games

is there a way to play as a good vampire? or is the story all about surviving like eveline said?

This is excellent! Love the fighting system. My only issue is the background music. I found some of the repetitive noises grating, like the guy laughing at the bar entrance. I had to mute it during those parts. 

Well, the story certainly is interesting So far, and it's definitely clearly a very ambitious game Just from the startup. Honestly, I got a soft spot for vampire stories with AVNs at least those with good storytelling. It's early days so there's not a lot going on yet but I would say it needs a little bit more polish. Background music cleaner transitions for certain scenes.Maybe a little more shine on enemy attacks. Other than that, I would like a little more free will for character for Development. I can only assume that you intend for more of that early on. But there's a few chances even in the the part that's already released that you could have some moments to really make the character Your own. Example would be the classic showing restraint with your first victim. 

Beyond any of that, though, I'll hold out for future updates and see how this one goes. It's still early days, and i'm sure you got a lot more planned.Just take your time